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 Raido Kotetsu (WIP)

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PostSubject: Raido Kotetsu (WIP)   Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:34 pm

Name: Raido Kotetsu
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Age: 20
Gender: Male

Height: 6'
Weight: 500 lbs
Appearance: At first glance, Raido appears very normal looking. He wears a grey cloak, under which is a black shirt. He has long, dark shaggy hair that covers his ears and occasionally his eyes. He usually keeps his left arm hidden under his cloak, as it tends to draw unnecessary and unwanted attention to himself, being that it seems to be made of steel. When he does show his arm, it can be quite disconcerting. It's not especially pretty to look at, as his skills were not perfectly developed when he made it. It looks to be made of some kind of metal with a dark and tarnished silver color. Vents for air flow open along the shoulder and underarm, and the fingers are tipped in claws.

Personality Raido has gotten by in the world of rouge shinobi by not trusting anyone. He is always suspicious of anyone he meets, and tends to act with extreme prejudice. He always has a backup plan out of any situation he may find himself in. He is not against using underhanded means to achieve victory.

History Raido was born in the Hidden Rock Village, where he grew up like a normal kid born of shinobi parents.

Clan/Bloodline: Kotetsu clan, wielder of the Tetsumane, or Iron Blood.
Rank: C Rank Ronin
Village: Ex-Iwagakure
Starting Element: Earth and Water: Clan bloodline. Liquid Metallic subatance.
Weapons: His left arm. After being cut off, he used his bloodline limit to slowly meld a replacement arm, made of his liquid metal. Its fingers end in talons, and has several other components...to be added later. He can also shoot senbon out of his arm, which he has 20 of. He also has 2 exploding tags, 2 smokebombs, and a length of razer wire.

Extra As he grow stronger, he will develop his left arm into better forms.

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PostSubject: Re: Raido Kotetsu (WIP)   Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:09 pm

Just a couple of quick things man. First off, if you could embellish his history and personality just a tad. Why did he become a Ronin if he had a happy life as a shinobi of the hidden rock village? When did this happen? As for his personality, is he ever happy? =P

Secondly, you're going to have to create a clan topic with your Kekkei Genkai and have that approved before we can approve your character. It shouldn't take you too long, then you can start RPing =]
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PostSubject: Re: Raido Kotetsu (WIP)   Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:10 pm

Oh, and you don't have to do this now, but at some point could you please make a weapon topic for your arm, just so we can see the ins and outs of it since it's not quite yet developed.
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PostSubject: Re: Raido Kotetsu (WIP)   Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:17 pm

...Konzai...did you not see the (WIP) in the title? I'm not done with it, man. Don't worry, I'll address all that stuff. I know what i'm doing lol. >_>b
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PostSubject: Re: Raido Kotetsu (WIP)   Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:21 pm

Well, that's me severally, and once again, owned...
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